Asheri Rising

Arboreal Prowler

Shoot, I mentioned some creatures in my story before asking about it.

Okay, my characters, while journeying into one of the old Dedication temples (with heavy casualties) have encountered or will encounter the following creatures:

1) Extremely large, man-eating spiders about the size of five men.

2) A serpent. Not a dragon (you know what a serpent is). It killed a lot of the adventurers in the party by knocking them off the bridge they were crossing.

3) Skeletal warriors. Supposedly the skeletons of the adventurers who have died in the temple before now.

4) A powerful mystic that hypnotizes people by doing contact juggling (like Jareth does in "The Labyrinth")

5) They'll finally meet a very large, powerful demon, and have to kill it (it's like a balrog that walks on all fours)

Okay, if any of those are "unacceptable", just tell me, and I'll change it. I just wanna know if it's okay to add them.

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Keiru Silver

Most excellent, I've been waiting for someone to do this. All creatures get the green light from me, however, we're going to severely limit their area of existence until I see how your posts go.

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Keiru Emerald

For all future posters:

There shall be no references to "The Labyrinth" unless you are to make fun of David Bowie's rediculiously large codpiece.

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